I have been learning how to put detail into my writing I also use higher level words in my writing and I know when to use a capital letter and a full stop when I’m doing my writing.

Training Day

On Monday I’ve been practicing my underwater event race for the Olympics. After I’ve been practicing my underwater event from the past few weeks I am still not better than Joseph.  I walked out of my house locked  the door grabbed my really huge rock chucked it into the boot jump into my vehicle drove off to Paihia to practice my event for the Olympics because last year’s Olympic I came last place I did not like it so this year I am wanting to aim for first second or third place for this year Olympics. As I arrive at the beach I see the deep blue sea waiting for me to come have a swim. I walked to the back of my car to grabbed my really huge rock in the boot so I shut the boots door quickly ran to the sea because as I was running my really huge rock was pulling me to the ground. As I got there I chucked my huge rock into the sea I was also tired because my really huge rock made me so tired that I couldn't even go into the sea to practice for my event. After I had a half & hour rest on the beach I was walking so slowly into the sea like a turtle.  I walked into the sea it was cold like I was in a freezer. I swam to the bottom of the sea, grabbed my really huge rock and tired to hold my breath for 1 hour.  I tried so many times, I could finally hold my breath for 2 hours. I am finally better than Joseph.

On Monday we went to Waitangi Treaty Grounds to celebrate Matariki day and we also done a haka for our hosts.

                             

My chocolate family

This is a metaphor poem that I've been working on at school. I now know the difference between a simile and a metaphor because you write is instead of like, for a metaphor.

My chocolate family

Me and my family lives in a hard dark almond chocolate box.

Dad is the hard frozen dairy milk chocolate because he is the strong one.

Mum is the  delicious yummy special peanut slab chocolate because she is the yummy one that makes us survive.

Felila is the hard crunchy chocolate because she is the mean one to our sister.

Paea is a dark soft white chocolate because she is the weak one that always cries.

Liliani is a hard frozen picnic bar chocolate because she is the one that makes us laugh too much.

I am a dark coconut chocolate because I am the one that makes everyone angry because I am annoying to them.

My five random facts about me.

                       

                        1. My  favorite food is K.F.C.

                        2. My  favorite color is black.  

                        3. My favorite movie is captain america civil war.

                        4. My favorite animal is a lion and a tiger. 

                        5. My nick name is dude.

This is a animation that i made with my friend.

Here are six word that describe my summer holiday.

This is my personal introduction