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Wednesday 15 June 2016

My chocolate family

This is a metaphor poem that I've been working on at school. I now know the difference between a simile and a metaphor because you write is instead of like, for a metaphor.

My chocolate family


Me and my family lives in a hard dark almond chocolate box.


Dad is the hard frozen dairy milk chocolate because he is the strong one.

Mum is the  delicious yummy special peanut slab chocolate because she is the yummy one that makes us survive.

Felila is the hard crunchy chocolate because she is the mean one to our sister.


Paea is a dark soft white chocolate because she is the weak one that always cries.




Liliani is a hard frozen picnic bar chocolate because she is the one that makes us laugh too much.


I am a dark coconut chocolate because I am the one that makes everyone angry because I am annoying to them.